Rosalba - Great photostory. I liked the music. It was upbeat and grabbed my attention. I can tell that you love and have a great respect for your family. I don't know what I'd change - however, I think there was one slide that said something about "forgivness" and I think it should be forgiveness. The only reason I noticed was I had typos all over mine and had just finished correcting them. Great job!
Your story was great, Rosalba! I liked that you used a variety of fonts and your pictures were wonderful, too. I think I may have seen a typo on the slide with something about honor? I think you meant to say strengthen after that, but it didn't look spelled correctly..I may have just not looked at it correctly, so you may want to check that out. The music was great, too! Nice job!
Rosalba, I thought your story was great. It reminded me of my family because you have big family dinners and things like that. I thought your music worked really well and I liked how the video ended right as the song ended, I made sure mine did that as well.
Rosalba, I really enjoyed watching your photo story. The music was very upbeat. Your family is a lot like mine because we also have big meals on Sundays, except ours is usually breakfast food for lunch. :)I also loved the picture of the soldiers..how are they related to you? I have 2 older brothers in the 201st.
ROSALBA~ Great video, I liked how the music speed up it really grabbed my attention :) Good Job KK
ReplyDeleteLOL, opps thought that it was funny at the end where you say ur a WVian and ur wearing a pitt pirates hat hehehhe
ReplyDeleteHaha Kim I know, my boyfriend said the same thing but my response is that it was a cute picture of me!
ReplyDeleteRosalba - Great photostory. I liked the music. It was upbeat and grabbed my attention. I can tell that you love and have a great respect for your family. I don't know what I'd change - however, I think there was one slide that said something about "forgivness" and I think it should be forgiveness. The only reason I noticed was I had typos all over mine and had just finished correcting them. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYour story was great, Rosalba! I liked that you used a variety of fonts and your pictures were wonderful, too. I think I may have seen a typo on the slide with something about honor? I think you meant to say strengthen after that, but it didn't look spelled correctly..I may have just not looked at it correctly, so you may want to check that out. The music was great, too! Nice job!
ReplyDeleteRosalba, I thought your story was great. It reminded me of my family because you have big family dinners and things like that. I thought your music worked really well and I liked how the video ended right as the song ended, I made sure mine did that as well.
ReplyDeleteRosalba, I really enjoyed watching your photo story. The music was very upbeat. Your family is a lot like mine because we also have big meals on Sundays, except ours is usually breakfast food for lunch. :)I also loved the picture of the soldiers..how are they related to you? I have 2 older brothers in the 201st.
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